by andtheend
I quess it was funny,weird and sad. I know it is just a story. Well written as usual. You do have quite the imagination.
Creepy and sad, but somehow fascinating.
The desriptions of women were good but the actual eroticism and sexual activity could have used more detail.
Maybe a revision or sequel story of a 'copycat' collector?
Why cant women be kept as whore-slaves? Whats wrong with it?
The kind of weird that gives rise to a good series, or stands alone laughed at by most people. Looking at records this character seems to disapoear. Not surprised
hey andtheend:)
your story weird but hilarious!! :)) especially the funny twist at the end!!
am still chuckling over the end of the story!! :)) so the woman collector was undone by a burglar?! :))
What a twist.
Hot stories tell what is going on emotionally in the minds of the victim(s). Sexual details are good to add as well.
This was just an account of what Walter did and not very hot.
However weirdly interesting and funny.