All Comments on 'Complete Submission'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
You should be finished

As unbelievable as this story was, it was over before it got started, because with that much to loose, he would have turned around and walked out. The rest was rubbish.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Wow can't wait for the sequel

Are you sure you don't have direct access to my mind!!??

njlaurennjlaurenabout 12 years ago
hot story

Well written and intriguing.Look forward to reading more.......

LexiRoseLexiLexiRoseLexiabout 12 years agoAuthor
Oh I'm definitely not finished here ;)

Don't worry, there will be more to follow :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
The Light are On

Very erotic and well written. Will we be finding out what transpires with the lights on or are you finished with this story? I hope not!

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