All Comments on 'Count Down To Moonlight Ch. 06'

Need more soon please!

I cannot believe Duncan almost killed Jake!!!!! OMG!!!! Next chapter PLEASE!!!! HURRY!!!!!!!

So Duncan has bashed Jake and has raped his mate!!!...can't wait for the next chapter

can not wait till the next chapter was a most enjoyable chapter

He didn't have to tell her everything but he could have eased her mind a little, told her he would heal. And Duncan is out of control. Can't say I liked what he did to Keelay. Will she be able to trust him after this??

not sure where this is goin for duncan great story though so far just a little scared about whats gonna happen soon to duncan like retribution dunno

I have loved your story so far. I check back everyday, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Simply amazing but write more please!

Please post the next chapter soon,not torture us too long,thanks

next chapter please????

please write the next one asap cant wait to see what is going to happen

Why have you not posted the next chapter in this story.

You can't leave it like this it is not fair.

you HAVE to update I NEED to know what happens!

Ok, enough of the baiting of us-your readers. We need more=NOW!!!

Thank you very much :>)

Please? please another chapter?.....

Please?

True love does not create so many obstacles it overcomes them.

From the flow of the story. Far too many to be overlooked.

Not " her and Jake talked..." but "SHE and Jake talked..."

Threw, through.

Choice=the CHOICE was mine to make

Choose= I pick this one

Chose= Rymes with hose, past tense, I chose to be with you last week.

Get an editor.