All Comments on 'Cousins Reunion Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
good but

good story but she came into the room naked how could he help her back into her robe?

jou_ahnjou_ahnover 15 years agoAuthor
You're right.

***Thank you for the feedback. I have actually edited the story and made several changes. Cleaning up missed typos, tense problems and adjusted the story a bit, including fixing the robe faux pas.

***Proofing one's own writing is always a bit tough. My eyes see what is in my mind rather than what is actually on the page.

***As usual, the Edits take a few days to be posted. Check again in a few days and see if you like the changes. I like it better, but then I do have some bias. I enjoy writing this particular story line. I am glad there are at least a few fans enjoying it as well.

Thanks again

j

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Thank you

Thank you. I come here to be stimulated sexually and to get an erection. You gave me both. It felt great. Please continue writing such stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
More. Keep it going.

Why haven't you continued? Please write more chapters.

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