All Comments on 'Crime & Punishment Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
great

maybe she can bring over some young girl friends to get get trained too..good story

tinman69stinman69sover 19 years ago
Oh what a great starter story

Man this can go all kinds of places!!! I can see numerous chapters to this story!

Great job! Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
nice

Very nice opening, and nice place to leave a to be cont .

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Good Opener

and you sure have that "cliff-hanger ending" Thing down!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
awesome beginning

really good opening! I'm looking forward for more!!!

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