All Comments on 'Cumming Into The New Ch. 04'

This story is really well written. Very creative story development.

In the first paragraph he sees Linda & her husband in the hotel. Ok, I thought, she's getting a room & maybe hubby is going to watch! !

No not yet. You make your readers hang on for the next chapter.

Now they can write chapter 5 together or each could write their own version of what happens next.

SoleBrotherJeff,

Thanks for your comment and your input about my story. It would seem I reached at least one member of the target audience I was aiming for. I try to write what I look for in a story and when it comes to "erotica" I try to make it as close to the "text book" definition such as;

"Erotica is a genre of literature that includes sexually explicit details as a primary feature. Unlike pornography, erotica does not aim exclusively at sexual arousal. Though the distinction is blurring in modern works, erotica traditionally contains more sexual details than romance novels."

I personally don't happen to be a fan of stories where the Black Man must be somehow a user, if not an out right rapist, an abuser and verbally degrades a woman. That seems to be the "status quo" in a large majority of the stories here. I don't doubt that must "do it" for some people's taste and fantasies and they are more than welcome to them.

I prefer my erotica to lead some where and then go somewhere and finally be a sum of all things. So thanks again for your comment. And for all readers commenting or not. Favorable or not. All are welcome.