All Comments on 'Dabney Hunter Ch. 2'

I think if you continue with this story line it could really be GREAT. Get Mousy Girl to get involved with "Reds"

Maybe have her forced on her, she might like it

Please continue this one!

NOW THIS IS THE TYPE OF STORY THAT NEEDS 2 KEEP ADDING MORE CHAPTERS....A COMPLETE DELIGHT THAT ALLURES UR PRIMITIVE SIDE. ADD A BIT MORE OF ROUGH SCENES ( since u hv such a creative mind )AND ADD A BIT OF A TWIST 2 IT. XD

I usually like nonconsent, but this is just sick. It is clear that whoever wrote this hates women. And to imply that because this girl wasn't being held down that wasn't rape is wrong. This should be reported.

Or maybe you shouldn't judge FICTION! It's FICTION! Means no one was raped! Or should we also ban horror movies cause the FICTIONAL people that don't exist get FICTIOn murdered