by cburton
I had enjoyed the characters in the 2 previous stories. I thought the build up would be for son/father incest. I was disappointed that Doug has become so dominating and unkind. Why the degredation? I think the story was strong without having to debase anyone.
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There should've been a happier ending. You made the boss acted like he didn't enjoy it....
It's great just as it is. I'm always amazed by the tendency of commenters to tell an author what "should" have been done with the characters or plot, as if its the author's job to cater to the specifics of their individual fantasies. Write what you like. Plenty of others (like me) will find it incredibly hot.