All Comments on 'Dad is a Body Builder Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Sad turn of events.

I had enjoyed the characters in the 2 previous stories. I thought the build up would be for son/father incest. I was disappointed that Doug has become so dominating and unkind. Why the degredation? I think the story was strong without having to debase anyone.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
It was alright

There should've been a happier ending. You made the boss acted like he didn't enjoy it....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Awesome

It's great just as it is. I'm always amazed by the tendency of commenters to tell an author what "should" have been done with the characters or plot, as if its the author's job to cater to the specifics of their individual fantasies. Write what you like. Plenty of others (like me) will find it incredibly hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
hot fukin scenario! would luv to be a slave to a big cock

So hot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
hot

I have to have much more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Story

Excellent story need more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

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