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Her hand reached down to caress the smooth, flat shape of her tummy. Even if it didn't take this time, she knew that it was just a matter of trying again. She couldn't be any happier.
She looked forward to his reaction once he heard the news -- that his energetic efforts might've already forced a child into her. After such an incredibly long night, there was no way that she wasn't knocked up. She could feel it.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoOkay, so I'll be the fly in the ointment. This story had a lot of promise, but the writing was... Dismal. If ever a writer was in need of an editor, this story is proof of that. It was a struggle to get through it all. I can point out all the mistakes just on page one, but I doubt you'd take it seriously, especially with so many readers blowing sunshine up your ass. It's not your imagination, it your mechanics. Get a GOOD editor. I can't stress that enough.
Anonymousover 4 years agoI love impregnation and I love daddy-daughter smut. This hit all the right zones, and it was amazing to read. You definitely have talent for this, as you seem to come up with more ways to describe people who have sex than I have ever seen. Never stop writing.
Also, to everyone groaning and moaning for a next chapter...how about you try looking for it first? They already DID write a chapter two you lazy numskulls.
animal99over 4 years agoI loved this story but the previous poster is right - You need a NEXT chapter and FATHER needs to start making love to his daughter/wife, as least to show his appreciation for having her as his lover, or the Amount of Pleasure she gives him, or to show how much he does love her, as his daughter. After all, it's only natural to start making love or loving gestures to someone you've been having wonderful sex with, even this long.
bigdaddyg123over 4 years agoDown on her luck, Sophia has lost her apartment at college and needs to find housing; she locates her long-absent father, "David" who is willing to take her in--for nefarious reasons. After he gets her drunk, he beds her with a wham bam, thank-you ma'am fuck! When she awakens after heavy beer drinking, when she awakens she's dizzy, she falls, hitting her head causing a concussion/memory loss. He father tricks her the next day, as them being lovers and his name as "David," or Dad if she feels like and prefers doing so; she goes with "David."
This story is very well written. The theme and plot is somewhat unusual but easily believable. Her father's motives are to use her for his long-missing fuck-buddy (his long ago divorced ex-wife/Sophia's mother) which he needs (sex) badly, and uses his daughter often. Unfortunately, her father never develops any stylistic moves of foreplay nor concerns for pleasuring his long-missing daughter.
The story needs a second chapter; Sophia's father needs to realizes how very lucky he is to have her back in his life, and begins to sincerely treat her as a much needed, loving and appreciated life-partner and mother to their children.
