All Comments on 'Debauching Wendy Ch. 05'

hard to read when it's one giant paragraph.

I love the story but getting hit over the head with this WoT hurts... {Wall of Text}

Grammar, spelling, and structure is what helps readers understand what is in the author's mind. That is why it is important.

However, it is a nice read. Thank you for sharing you Force. May you eternally ask the Goddess to alight your path.

I forgot to include another suggestion. Think of a paragraph as a single moment in time, or single action during a scene. It is perfectly good to let a paragraph be one or two sentences.