All Comments on 'Decide For Yourself'

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chytownchytownabout 10 years ago
O K Story***

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
another author

with a very small I.Q.

thebuffalothebuffaloabout 10 years ago

Absolutely outstanding. Very well written. Hotter than the lowest level of hell. Enjoyed it completely. Definite 5 Star.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Not much to it

A very bare story. It does not go anywhere, it has no meaning.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Interesting adaptation of the "unknown visitor" scene. Nicely written, even though not very erotic

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 10 years ago
Good

Good, but not great! Not enough tension (AKA drama) ... the cologne had to carry the heaviest load (and did not 'deserve' mention in round two?) Same as round one? No cologne? A different cologne??

3.8 = 4*

sandymonroesandymonroeabout 10 years ago

The start was good, altouth, you should have continue with the thoughts and dialogs later in the story.

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Another

Another POS husband who thinks it's fun to get his wife raped for her birthday.

iameaseliameaselalmost 3 years ago

Well being one and done was a win for the readers here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

The cologne present on the first guy should have been detected on the second guy. If not, then you been hit by a, smooth criminal.

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