by octobergirl
WOW great start to what I know is going to be a wonderfully entertaining story. I can't WAIT for the next chapter..... there is a next chapter I hope LOL
Happy writing!
Very amazingly written, gloriously erotic. ;) very drenching. I absolutely loved it and can't wait for the next (hopefully longer) installment.
I want one!! Wow, I too hope there are more installments coming soon. I liked it so much I read it a second time. You have a great writing style that many have to push for, but you seem like a natural.
a completely delicious story . . there is no other way to describe it :-D
A wonderfully sexy little story you've written here. Thank you for sharing. I hope I'll be lucky enough to read some more of your work in the future
this story was amazing. please keep up the amazing work and wriitng. and please let there be more
damn, normally i dont go for 'daddy' stories, but this one was spectacular