All Comments on 'Demon Seed from Heaven'

by octobergirl

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

WOW great start to what I know is going to be a wonderfully entertaining story. I can't WAIT for the next chapter..... there is a next chapter I hope LOL

Happy writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
perfect

Very amazingly written, gloriously erotic. ;) very drenching. I absolutely loved it and can't wait for the next (hopefully longer) installment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Wonderful

I want one!! Wow, I too hope there are more installments coming soon. I liked it so much I read it a second time. You have a great writing style that many have to push for, but you seem like a natural.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
delicious

a completely delicious story . . there is no other way to describe it :-D

Magus_RoninMagus_Roninalmost 14 years ago
Lovely

A wonderfully sexy little story you've written here. Thank you for sharing. I hope I'll be lucky enough to read some more of your work in the future

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
More!

Please make a part two this story is great.

estelinestelinover 12 years ago
Amazing

this story was amazing. please keep up the amazing work and wriitng. and please let there be more

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
hot

damn, normally i dont go for 'daddy' stories, but this one was spectacular

Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114ualmost 4 years ago
Loved It!

Especially the daddy/daughter part ;)

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