by octobergirl
damn, normally i dont go for 'daddy' stories, but this one was spectacular
this story was amazing. please keep up the amazing work and wriitng. and please let there be more
A wonderfully sexy little story you've written here. Thank you for sharing. I hope I'll be lucky enough to read some more of your work in the future
a completely delicious story . . there is no other way to describe it :-D
I want one!! Wow, I too hope there are more installments coming soon. I liked it so much I read it a second time. You have a great writing style that many have to push for, but you seem like a natural.
Very amazingly written, gloriously erotic. ;) very drenching. I absolutely loved it and can't wait for the next (hopefully longer) installment.
WOW great start to what I know is going to be a wonderfully entertaining story. I can't WAIT for the next chapter..... there is a next chapter I hope LOL
Happy writing!