All Comments on 'Descendant of Baccus Pt. 09'

I love the story but you need new content. #6, #7, #8, & #9 is all information that you have already provided in the earlier chapters. I do hope you plan on finishing this story so good luck. Other than content everything is great.

This chapter, as with the last three chapters, is simply a restatement of previous chapters. It's beginning to read like a "daytime drama" (ie, the soap operas) where a viewer can view one episode at the start of the year and neglect to watch until years end, knowing that the story will have moved exactly nowhere during that time.

I'm quite sad to have said this, since I really was interested by the first four chapters.