All Comments on 'Desert Adventure'

I have absolutely loved both of the stories you wrote, but this one is my favorite at the moment. Keep this going, I'm hoping for some extremely dirty and nasty scenes in the next chapter. Keep it up!

Cant wait till she is sold to the merchants

Very well written. For sure a woman turns nympho after coming in touch with arabs or just being there.

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More of the same racist crap.

this writing is an ugly cliche. it is offensive, & factually incorrect. [do some research before publishing

]. The story is misogynistic and sadistic. a monument to racist stereotyping. you can do much better with a little research and work.

Very well written.The dirty language used by Victoria adds to the lust.

Very well written.The dirty language used by Victoria adds to the lust.

Very well written.The dirty language used by Victoria adds to the lust.

Very well written.The dirty language used by Victoria adds to the lust.

crap

I'm surprised at some of the harsh reaction to this story. This kind of tale has been around for generations in one form or another. In my opinion most of the stories classified under Interracial Love are more racist than this little nod to tradition.

I suspect many people label a story racist only if it takes aim at one of their favorite non-white groups.

Great story good read. You did a great job of identifying the wife as a slut. Hubby was right to get shut.

Our white mothers and wives belong to any Muslim that wants them Arab, Pakistani, Sri-Lankan, Bangladeshi, Egyptians, Iraqis even Indians