All Comments on 'Desk Set'

by MonikaBlue

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thunderfulthunderfulabout 20 years ago
Fun Work!

Reading this story just makes me want to go crawl under a desk!

A wonderful story, a pleasant departure from the usual Literotica fare. The devil is in the details, and MonikaBlue has a devilish mind. Great imagery that stirs all the senses.

Wonderful creative wordplay, realistic situations, and a slow build add up to a story that kept me on the edge of her seat, eagerly lapping it all in. So very easy to imagine myself in his shoes.

Great work again Monika, keep it (us) up!

Cyyber_ChickCyyber_Chickover 17 years ago
Great story!

Great story! Well-written, well-thought out, great build up and character development and very hot. When can we read the next chapter??

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