All Comments on 'Devil in the Details Ch. 01'

I hope this is not one of those stories with the two 'bimbettes' getting over on the main character. It would be great to see a 'nice' guy finally getting a happy ending.

The teasing is good, but Steven' s behaviour is all over the map: shy but making sex jokes with a supervisor? Copping feels of two office tarts, but practically going catetonic in the aftermath? Makes the to hard to swallow.