All Comments on 'Devilbliss Ch. 03'

Excellent work, its beginning to be a very good story but is still a bit short, perhaps you'd consider writing longer chapters but that could just be me, as i like the long ones.

I do like the softness of your approach. Sometimes a scared girl being treated as a child can be the way to go, a little bit of dark and light. Well it did it for me ;-)

Great job hope to see alot more soon.

Little_rabbit

please write more...

I really enjoyed this short 3 part story about Devilbliss. I'm really curious to know how she came to be a slave. And now with Reluctant Submission being continued & Devilbliss being renamed Felix, I'm enjoying it more. Can't wait to read more about Felix!!!

Without background on the setting this takes place in, the when, where and how it doesn’t make sense, it reads as a random guy with a sex slave. If it’s contemporary, non consensual and set in a westernised country US/Europe then it just comes across as sinister and creepy because it’s not normal to own another person. The impression given in the story appears to show slavery as being normal.