by HubbaBubba99
First let me thank you for continuing the series, I truly hope there will be many more chapters.
I would also like him to see him finally have sex with his mom, not to mention other women in his family and his mothers friends.
Please keep up the amazing work
Also I would really like it if he impregnates his mom since that would truly be the ultimate taboo.
An excellent second chapter - you managed to expand his use of his powers beyond his mother (it would seem unbelievable if he got these powers and ONLY used them on her) but still continued the main story with his mother. No matter who else he uses his power on in each chapter, you should always move the mother/son story forward. And you're continuing to make it even hotter by him giving her suggestions in increments instead of just going right for sex, which is great.
Perhaps future suggestions could include kissing, showering together, sleeping together (just sleeping, but in the same bed), making her lust after him, and instigating more lesbianism between her and her friend. Just keep building slowly, don't rush right to the end.
In the last part the protagonist calls his mom "mom" and not by her first name. Please correct it.
Nice chapter looking forward to the next chapter.
I like that he’s working his way up to the motherfuck. They should French kiss more and I’m looking forward to why kind of home movies he’s going to make with his mom and her friends. Wonder if he’ll get off on parading his women around town. Hmmmm
Agree with the last comment, like how he's working his way up to fucking her, make the next step kissing or showering or sleeping (just sleeping) together. Hope to see another chapter soon!
This is one of the best stories I've read plaese add a third chapter or more.
It would be a great Christmas present if you continued this story.
It is so sad that this story was dropped. It is really very hot, and I could easily see it spanning several more chapters. Ah well, if only, right?
If you are reading this Hubba, thank you very much for taking time to write this, because even though it isn't finished, it was still a very enjoyable read.
This was a great start to a story. I've seen authors continue stories years later, I hope you will do the same.
I hope you will continue this story, it would be great to see Mom and Mandy ...
These were short and sweet. I am wondering if you are still out there. There are so many things that you could do in further chapters. So many things he could learn about his new ability. At least post in here to let us know if you are thinking of adding more.
These 2 chapters were a great start to a story that I always hoped would be continued. Here's hoping one day I visit your page and see Chapter 03
It's 3 years later and I'm still hoping for further chapters in this story.