All Comments on 'Dr. Hughes, OBGYN'

not EVEN believable. now, if you had made a comment at the end that the doctor was your bf or husband, then that would be believable, but NO doctor in the world would do what you just described, so it's COMPLETELY UNBELIEVABLE, therefore it's not even erotic.

it could be with a few changes, though

although the screwing happened so fast I thought he might be a lawyer instead of a doctor, but since he apparently left you with enough money for another visit I guess that theory is out.

most get caught, eventually, but some never, unfortunately

at first, those women who've been sexually "serviced" defend such bastards:

"oh, no, my doctor would NEVER do that!" and then when evidence are too overwhelming, with many more women turning up, filing suit (women who were threatened or were too ashamed to do anything, NOT those who scream: "oh, god, come deep in me, you sexy doctor!"),,, THEN, they, too pretend to be hurt, when such bastards are going down big time, with malpratice suits coming at them from every which way and their state medical board is revoking their licensure to proactice medicine

oh, wait, this is only a story! lol (but, again, in real life, this SORT OF THING really happens more frequently than most people realize)

Don't listen to what those other persons say....I thought it was incredibly hot. For heaven's sake it's a story...no more...no less...it was very erotic for me...in fact I generally never leave a comment...but after seeing some of the others...I had to let you know that I loved your story....

I've written storie and the comments have said similar in regard to authenticity. I say tell 'em to use their imagination a bit more.

Funny thing is my stories are true - this could be too. Keep writing and ignore the unfounded comments of the obviously boring and lesten to the praise.

Fucking great story and it turned me on big time - thank you!