All Comments on 'Dream Come True Ch. 03'

by 2CHaNces

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
loved it

more please ;)

LilMami07LilMami07almost 14 years ago

love this story :) cant wait til the next chapter **lilmami07**

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
love this story

Thanks for the stories. I love this one. It's interesting and it just sucks me in. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Looool

I really like this one :D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

whens the next chapter coming??

uzimuzimalmost 14 years ago
When?

Got damn is he ever going to fuck her?

TakilaTakilaalmost 14 years ago
Thank you

Thank you for the update, I was missing this story.

Cydney as hanging on by a wing and a prayer,

he so wants Taryn.

Update again soon

mariasmdmariasmdalmost 14 years ago
??

so, far this story is has been very well written, except i think that you are perhaps lacking in character development. for, instance i only know that Taryn is black girl because of the tags that are attached to the story, but you have not described her physical attributes, so i really didnt know that she was black.

IpFc22IpFc22over 13 years ago
Please don't end things here!

Please continue on with the story. I really like how it's playing out so far. Cydney's one heck of a guy. He makes me wish there were more bold/confident -but-not-in-a-stupid/misogynistic-way men out there. I do have to echo a previous commenter in that a little bit more character development (for both main characters of course but especially) for Taryn would be great. Looking forward to reading more chapters from you.

ColorofLoveColorofLoveover 13 years ago
Really good

Will she give in or not theys seemed made for each other, however the dream sequence give the reader a good idea to them in the future. Enjoyed the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Umm Yeah

I LOVE this series. It's awesome, I love the characters, the way that Cydney is so intense about his desire for a future with Tayrn is really sweet and hot at the same time... So yeah, describe them (especially her) more in the next installment please. Thanks.

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxabout 13 years ago
i'm hooked!

I could actually see this happening... wonderful dream in real time... someone wanting to love someone who probably dosen't believe in true love....

Wonderful

luv_romanceluv_romanceabout 12 years ago
wonderful... :)

i want more pleaseeee....

mimi186mimi186almost 12 years ago
Cutest thing!

He's reminding me of the cute, sweet, amazing Darren Criss!!!

MADISONKAIMADISONKAIover 11 years ago
Very good story.

You write dialogue very well. NOT CHEESY. Excellent flow. It's so good I plan on reading all of it in one go.

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 10 years ago
Cute...irresitably cute

Lots of fun and a cute story line. Adorable!!! Love the freshness

in this tale.

chocolatesistachocolatesistaabout 10 years ago
Omg

I'm smiling like crazy this chapter was so good, but on the real I wish dreams did come true, at least some anyway... Keep up the great writing up:)

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 9 years ago

Her brothers are so crazy and ughh I love cydney

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