All Comments on 'Dreams of a Whore'

This was actually well written, the story flowed. I had an impression of the woman, but it was too short. The piece needed to be about 10 times longer, especially how she made the mental leap to prostitution.

I don't understand why her family didn't expect her to keep the child. I don't understand how a 9 month preg is a mis-carriage. I don't know why a preg woman wasn't able to get social services in an America.

It short, the story didn't allow me to suspend belief because there were too many questions.

I would like to see you expand this, I think the strong emotions of a "good" woman with no option but selling her body has the making of a good story.

Agree with Josephus. Far too short. No developed enough. Looks like a 2nd draft; a good one, but only that.