All Comments on 'Dreams of Jeannie Ch. 02'

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Marklynda2 3 months ago

Definitely need to figure out how to do that mind control thing. Another well thought out and written chapter, I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring them to the story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

greg2906 over 13 years ago

I Dream Of...

I wonder if the Major ever had his genie work out like this for him?

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