All Comments on 'Drops in a Strawberry'

never read worse. grammer, spelling, etc. 'Her' balls? How did this get through?

This was semi-literate at best. It was so bad, it lost all eroticism.

Get an editor.

This is supposed to be Romance?

I have to agree with the rest that this is certainly not romance but more of erotic coupling since both of them met for the first time even though both have communicate thru the computer. It was lust that brought them together.

And it was definitely a wasted effort with lots of mistakes. It was bumpy to read. If you've clean up those errors it would be a much better read.

Well, better luck next time.