by steviet
For a bar girl this would be very "hot." For a married schoolteacher it is not in the least believable.
Just the kind of garbage that makes you feel dirty just reading it. A better finish would be. I woke with the sensation of wetness against my face. I turned to face Daryl and saw his big red smile. Then I noticed that the smile looked strange, just gaping, red, and wet. My pillow was soaked with his blood. I tried to scream, but nothing came out of my mouth. My last sight was of my husband, drawing the knife slowly across my throat. He has a huge smile on his face.
The author did a very poor job on this pathetic story. I'm fact it seems the author has some serious gay issues mixed with some cuckold issues that were transferred to this bad story.
This story lacks of creativity nonsense shallow low context poor written and it is not even hot nor sexy story.
This story is not enjoyable and it is such waste of time reading all the way through.
About honest comments.... lets see... your characters suck, making your story real trash
I Loved loved loved this story, tempted so many times by my pupils but never acted on it, please keep her and daryl going, it;s wonderful.
Lucy