All Comments on 'Eladrin Princess'

That was so Hot

(third time I started writing this)

You have a way of telling a story that reminds me of something I forgot.

There are a couple of awkward phrases or correctly spelled 'incorrect grammar', that suggest you could have used an editor. You could always resubmit the edited story or just leave it and consider using an editor next time.

Your work would only shine all the more if you did.

There. A lot shorter this time.

Can't wait to see the next story.

I absolutely loved this! It's rare to see stories wherein the participants are as enthused as Quina and Shanoa.