All Comments on 'Elf Pleasure Ch. 02'

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RavishingRavishingover 20 years ago
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I must say I really enjoyed both parts 1 & 2 of this. It was nice, sweet and seemed relaxing.

~ Ravishing ~

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 20 years ago
Worth it

Part 1 was great and I had to wait a long time for this sequel.

It was worth it, though. I loved it.

JRavenJRavenover 20 years ago
Wish I had an elf...

Your writing makes me wish I had one of my own. Not that she owns Fabian, but still. I like the way you introduced Amy. I can see where there are a lot of possible directions you can take the series. I eagerly await the next installment!

Jenny

JRaven

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
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Just as good as the first one. All I have to say is YAY! I want more =D.

noone269noone269about 20 years ago
Better than the first

chapter, can't wait for more.

impressiveimpressiveover 19 years ago
Delightful ... simply delightful

I missed Ch. 01 somehow, but my enjoyment of this story couldn't have been any greater. Very nice work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Outstanding use of ellipses

Hi DP,

Loved reading your wonderful story. You never disappoint your readers. I loved the crispness of your dialogue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent story

Excellent two part story that deserves continuation. I hope the author will see the potential to expand this into something very sexy and very special

Jim44444Jim44444almost 11 years ago
Onward to chapter three

Thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
More

I like these but I want him inside her. Now.

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