All Comments on 'Elf Pleasure Ch. 02'

I like these but I want him inside her. Now.

Thanks for writing.

Excellent two part story that deserves continuation. I hope the author will see the potential to expand this into something very sexy and very special

Hi DP,

Loved reading your wonderful story. You never disappoint your readers. I loved the crispness of your dialogue.

I missed Ch. 01 somehow, but my enjoyment of this story couldn't have been any greater. Very nice work!

chapter, can't wait for more.

Just as good as the first one. All I have to say is YAY! I want more =D.

Your writing makes me wish I had one of my own. Not that she owns Fabian, but still. I like the way you introduced Amy. I can see where there are a lot of possible directions you can take the series. I eagerly await the next installment!

Jenny

JRaven

Part 1 was great and I had to wait a long time for this sequel.

It was worth it, though. I loved it.

I must say I really enjoyed both parts 1 & 2 of this. It was nice, sweet and seemed relaxing.

~ Ravishing ~