All Comments on 'Elle Ch. 03'

First off congratulations on the wonderful writing. For 3 chapters there was a real depth to this story. Elle was perfect, the Master almost but not quite. A bit like the coyboy who shoots his own horse rather than let someone else do it he should have released her rather than running away. Still way better than most stories I have read here and I hope you write more. Cheers. -- UK CYNIC

The story was very touching and you felt the characters throughout.

From a submissive owned by a married man, this story touched me so deeply....i thank you for it.

a really great story, i had tears in my eyes by the end of it

I would hope she finds what she needs with some one free to be hers. And yes, the Master can belong to the sub as well.

That's the crappy ending you come up with. Wow wish I hadn't bothered with this story. Did you forget to write in that he's male so he really should have a pair of balls? Hate that he "accepts responsibility" but yet he never actually does. He claims he loves her if he did he'd either really let her go or leave his wife for her. So he doesn't love her. When the sub in the relationship has to make the Dominant decisions that's sad. He is simply a selfish, arrogant, manipulative man. Hope the wife leaves him too! Just what he deserves. He may as well have been saying poor me, poor me, poor me.

This was beautifully written

He should of released her properly it’s crueller to keep in constant contact if he’s not going to leave his wife, he deserves to loose his wife though through his actions, both women don’t realise he’s playing them both an loving it he’s got the best of both worlds his family life an another woman who adores him an he had a 2 year affair with