All Comments on 'Elysium Ch. 03'

obviously Alex and Abi are meant to be together--I'm looking forward to seeing Doug punished for his lies.

Looking forward to future installments.

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for real, it's rather silly and stupid,,, there's hardly any point in this "story"

Thank you for the next chapter, you had me a bit worried for a while (I didn't think you will going to write another chapter). I like your writing style and don't listen to the negitive comments if they don't like it, they don't have to read it.

You gave us more background and a longer chapter. We understand what brought Abi and Alex to their current situation. Alex and Abi are lusting for each other. He begins to pursue her. But I think they need to get to know each other - talking unless they are all about sex which I don't have a problem with. But I think you want to delve deeper than that. I like this story because of all the potential - awaiting your next update.

hope that there's another chapter very, very soon!!!!!

Wouldn't you know it I have one other person to add to my I don't like list. Ms. Trap wench whore herself Diane Gates. Though I wish that Alex had not gone down on that trick nasty ho and had not fucked her...but a man gotta do what a man gotta do and release some pressure wish it wasn't so good for her. Loved the update can't wait til we get bevis and butthead out of the way in fact they should get together and go play in traffic. Thanks

Five.