All Comments on 'Emma and Kathy'

Simply unreadable.

I hope there's second part to this story...

Great start keep going

Really good, please keep going!

I'm sorry to say, but this story was barely even readable.

Perhaps it makes more sense in another language, but in English it made almost no sense at all.

This is not bad for the start of a long running stories, I'm not sure where that last comment come from it was writen very good.

but needs some editing help. There were some grammatical errors that made it a little difficult to read. But with some help I would definitely like to read the next chapter.

Working with an editor (me or somebody else) will make your work easier to read and understand. Good for you for writing!

This has the makings of a nice romantic little series - a bit of editing from a Lit Volunteer Editor would help things along. I'll be looking out for the next chapter.

as a non native English speaker I know how hard it is to get everything right, but...

the overall feeling to the story is wonderful and that's what helps to make the magic happen. finding a friendly editor might help to further improve and bring your story to shine.

keep up the good work.

just like the others... I will definitely continue to read.

if you are ready... we sure are willing to stay with you.

<3

Couldn't get past the first sentence.

You'd be better off using google translate or just giving up. A quick skim gave me a headache and the plot wasn't even all that promising. I don't know how you got 7 favorites.

Story looks promising and yes there were grammatical errors but reading through the critics it would appear that English is not your first language. In that case, yes what you have achieved this far is promising. Trust me, there are a lot of peope here (authors and critics) where their English is appalling. So take heart as it is a complex language with many confusing nuances.

From the story perspective it would have been good to possibly expand on Emma and Kathy a bit more, but maybe that is yet to evolve.

Hey really good going so far! Anxious to hear more!

Don't listen to the one that said this is crap. This is a good first start. English is a hard language to get right, a good editor will help. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out.