All Comments on 'Emma's Pool Party Ch. 02'

by thewhitestripe

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bryand450bryand450about 12 years ago
Awesome!!!

Damn nice work! Loved it! Maybe when Aysha "borrows" him we could meet some of her friends. =))

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Damn impressive. Hope there is more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
hope there's more!

loving the series, please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
More!

Wow! Loving this series!

Would love to see more of Hollie!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Would love to read of Carmen's reaction to the video left for her

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Chapter 3 please!

Loving Emma's Pool Party! Could I borrow Holly and Emma for a night or two? ;D

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
wow

Omg

this story is making me so wet. When us carmen getting home to the fun

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
He was a few inches in

...when he hit her hymen?????

Stopped reading at that point because it was clear you don't have a clue about female anatomy.

thewhitestripethewhitestripeover 11 years agoAuthor
Actually...

... it says "I pushed in hard. I felt Amy's hymen break as I slid into her." He was a few inches in 'after' breaking her hymen.

Feel free to read the rest of the story now. :)

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Very hot. This lucky guy is the Superman of sex. Great to have all those attractive young women wanting you, but as the story relates it's not always ideal - if you want everyone to stay engaged, need to get a couple more guys into the action!

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