All Comments on 'Endless Cycle'

man, if that was for real, I've got to give you props for making the right decision - best story I've read on this site

This story was quite a surprise to me. After so many bland entries on this site, finally a story with fully-dimensional characters and a realistic ending. I believe that this author has the potential to improve himself to the point of becoming a professional writer in a non-erotic genre--if he so chooses. Good luck.

I absolutly loved this story. wow is all i can say. i loved that it actually had depth to it, not just sex. it had a story with it. I love black guys and i would be in heaven if i had a guy like in this story. wow. awesome writing! everyone should write stories like this. much more enjoyable.

I loved this story. It sounds like a recent event in my own life. A bit different but heart aching all the same. This story reminds me of him, my first black love. I miss him terribly.

Thats right doc, whip that pussy dont get pussy whipped! I seriously want to applaud you on sticking to your guns. And as you seen at the end she didnt get enough of being a punching bag, and should probably just reserve a room in advance for her next stay at her local ICU! But anyway I've read a few stories on this site and yours is the only one I bothered to respond to so keep em coming. Peace!

Your writing style is for interesting. You were able to hold my focus through the non-erotic parts. You are a natural storyteller. You are probably a real person rather than those fake moutherfucker.

Good shit bruh!

...reads like one of those literary detective noir (I know, wrong genre for it) stories. Liked the fact that, for once, it wasn't about aiming for a quick release for me.