by blackzilla99
...reads like one of those literary detective noir (I know, wrong genre for it) stories. Liked the fact that, for once, it wasn't about aiming for a quick release for me.
Your writing style is for interesting. You were able to hold my focus through the non-erotic parts. You are a natural storyteller. You are probably a real person rather than those fake moutherfucker.
Thats right doc, whip that pussy dont get pussy whipped! I seriously want to applaud you on sticking to your guns. And as you seen at the end she didnt get enough of being a punching bag, and should probably just reserve a room in advance for her next stay at her local ICU! But anyway I've read a few stories on this site and yours is the only one I bothered to respond to so keep em coming. Peace!
I loved this story. It sounds like a recent event in my own life. A bit different but heart aching all the same. This story reminds me of him, my first black love. I miss him terribly.
I absolutly loved this story. wow is all i can say. i loved that it actually had depth to it, not just sex. it had a story with it. I love black guys and i would be in heaven if i had a guy like in this story. wow. awesome writing! everyone should write stories like this. much more enjoyable.
This story was quite a surprise to me. After so many bland entries on this site, finally a story with fully-dimensional characters and a realistic ending. I believe that this author has the potential to improve himself to the point of becoming a professional writer in a non-erotic genre--if he so chooses. Good luck.
man, if that was for real, I've got to give you props for making the right decision - best story I've read on this site