by hipslikecinderella
Finely-wrought. A huge achievement for a first post. Thank you.
cruei, yet highly erotic. Nicely done. Looking forward to your next story.
for all the lovely feedback! i'm really flattered. i won't be submitting any stories in the next few months as i'm going away but i really enjoyed writing this - my first - so expect more in the late summer.
thanks again.
The description at the beginning was a little overdone to me (it was too long to keep me interested) but I'd say the rest of the story makes up for it.