All Comments on 'Erotic Anticipation'

I really good story, very hot progression. I do think that it could really benefit with more set-up as to who these people are and what their relationship is exactly.

I like that you didn’t give the names or any background on the characters. It allows the reader to put themselves in the story. Can’t wait for the rest of the story.

This could me and a good friend who have not yet crossed the line.