All Comments on 'Evening Nap'

wow, I really loved the story, although it could have gone on a little longer i guess, it was great...kept me on the edge of my seat or throbbing in my pants so to speak. Thank you xx

I liked that you tried to show both points of view, but it got a little confusing at times as you switched views. Very good job describing the emotions and thoughts going on. Overall I liked it quite a bit.