by ErroticWhispers
Liked the style of writing, and the legnth of it. Was hoping that it would be Mike from the beginning!!
Wow, that was a perfect non-consent story. exciting
without being violent.
all she really wanted was for him to take charge,and be a man. so that's what he did,he took control and proved to her that he can in fact be what she needs. she belongs to him,and lucky for him she was still able to respond to him sexually. i reckon this could be a rape,but it was more a D/s story.at least in my book. nice job EW.keep writing.
Justine is so annoying. The way she speaks is so unnatural. I know this was just a short story, but everything about Justine is just so irritating. I mean she dated Mike for five years, she should be able to recognize his voice, even if she's not sober.
This wasn't the worst thing I've ever read, and I can tell you put effort into it, but it wasn't good. The story was far too irritating to be arousing. I'm sorry, but you deserve an honest opinion.