All Comments on 'Every Woman's Darkest Fantasy'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Liked it a lot

Liked the style of writing, and the legnth of it. Was hoping that it would be Mike from the beginning!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
hot

Wow, that was a perfect non-consent story. exciting

without being violent.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
wow

all she really wanted was for him to take charge,and be a man. so that's what he did,he took control and proved to her that he can in fact be what she needs. she belongs to him,and lucky for him she was still able to respond to him sexually. i reckon this could be a rape,but it was more a D/s story.at least in my book. nice job EW.keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
To be honest

Justine is so annoying. The way she speaks is so unnatural. I know this was just a short story, but everything about Justine is just so irritating. I mean she dated Mike for five years, she should be able to recognize his voice, even if she's not sober.

This wasn't the worst thing I've ever read, and I can tell you put effort into it, but it wasn't good. The story was far too irritating to be arousing. I'm sorry, but you deserve an honest opinion.

2MuchLust2MuchLustalmost 9 years ago

Very Erotic, yet tasteful. Delicious!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Very nice well written steamy yet romantic and very erotic

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