All Comments on 'Everything Has a Price Ch. 04'

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ValensGirlValensGirlabout 10 years ago

Mmmm, god, I love the tease and denial in this. Especially the bit where he realizes that he's left with a hard, aching cock while she's getting herself off! Hot. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great chapter

I agree, this was a great chapter. Nicely done.

HarryHaversackersHarryHaversackersover 13 years ago
Better

I found this installment of "Everything Has a Price" a little more representative of what I perceive the relationship between loving partners in a D/s relationship to be like, although I still find the Mistress/slave dialogue somewhat stiff and formulaic. Overall, I'm enjoying this series, but not nearly as much as your earlier stories.

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