All Comments on 'Exam Share'

by maltteezer

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taxpapabobtaxpapabobover 14 years ago
Exam Share Should Wait

The sex is OK, as is the psychology. But the black shlong stereotype is poor, and the grammar is just plain awful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Not bad

The grammar is not the best but then again its the users first story, i enjoyed it and hope there is more to come.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I liked it!

Don't care if you're a new writer. This was a good story. write more, it will get better as you go. Like the premise.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
not bad at all

I agree the 1st time big black cock storyline is a bit wore out, but hey guys, this ain't an english lit class here.

Give the guy a break will ya. It's fantasyland in here and he's living one out.

Keep up the good work, maltteezer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
so hot!!

I came harder then I ever have before. I wish this would happen to me

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
morr

This got me hpt but like to read about sister possibly catching them

subbytubbysubbytubbyover 1 year ago

Needed more verbal interaction from the brother. I just didn't get it. It got me interested in the beginning and held onto me in the middle and the ending wording about being good for the sister made me question why? But I was confused as to why? Can I have a second chapter with another session and much more domination by the brother and with that verbal understand why he would be good for his sister? I'd really like to read that.

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