by MistressVal
Such a wonderful and realistic chapter. I’m impressed with the care and responsibility Ms Stanton takes of her sub.
The promise is also wonderful - young employee has crush on the youngish parter, who discovers the novel-in-process, revealing the inner mind of the sub.
Wonderful writing.
This story is almost perfect. My favorite part is a ritual :) thank You, write more and more :)
i agree with tadaj, i hate pain but for Mistress ........ well that is another thing all together.
A really good story with wonderful description of the pain and the feelings of both Mistress and slave. Thank you for such a good read.
I have just read another of your stories, and loved that one, I have read this one and LOVED IT! Brilliant! Thank you!
Perhaps the best of this story is the way you described the submissive's pleasure in receiving the pain not for the love of pain but for the symbolism of the submission.
A wonderful job, Mistress.
oooh MistressVal, that was so hot, i would love to have been your sub in this story....
i am just driping wet
thank you so much, and i look forward to more of your stories