All Comments on 'Eye Candy'

The descriptions and story line at the start of the story was great - really motivating the reader to read on - but then just sags. And the ending came out of nowhere and had nothing to do with rest of story. Would like to see another story but save first few paragraphs.

the story was awesome...except the ending. i mean, its sweet and hot. i love them together. its just well, im a sap for happy ending and i wish that they couldve ended up together. so sad.