All Comments on 'Fall of '69 Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
keep going!

you're heading back in the right area... keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
That's it, back to a good story.

Now your going back in the right direction. Back to the love story of the summer of 69. Back to the story I can relate to. Don't stop now, we want more.

Another mature hippie

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Yeah thats what we want!

Give us more of the story we learned to love. And please don't keep us waiting so long this time. You have a hot very believable story here but go bach to Doc and Becky alone with more adventures. Maybe as Doc becomes a back to the lander with becky at his side? We mature hippies are coming out of the wood work for this one. Mike

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Where do they go from here?

It would be such a letdown if these chapters don't have a happy ending -- Jeremy comes home; Lisa leaves; Doc and Becky live happily ever after. I know life isn't like that -- but I'm hoping that's how this story ends. Wilderness, you've taken us to the edge several times. Now we want the tenderest of endings.

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