All Comments on 'Fall of The Femme Fatales Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Simple Question

why he has 3 why be greedy and take all five for himself. I know why revenge but sometimes its fun just controlling 3 out of the 5. Now that he controls them will they still be superheroes or will they become super villians.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
please, let it be me

oh please can I be the next superhero, even though i am blonde, blue eyed and 38c-24-36. I would love to be part of the harem. Please write more xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Keeps getting better!

I love how much the characters are loving it.

Next: Onyx. A black stone. I can't wait!

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