All Comments on 'Fall of The Femme Fatales Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Thanks for the Great story and you had an ending

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
love this series

This is one of my favorite stories on this website. Sexy, good plot, and fun to read. What I like most about it is, while he has control of the women, they are happy and well treated.

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSabout 11 years ago
Need a parallel series

You could have them set up a resort on an island full of gorgous sex slaves who want nothing more than to please men. It would be very profitable, fun and sexy!

marcohoulemarcohouleabout 11 years ago

The story is simply incredible. Great plot, great characters, excellent sex scenes, some kind of psychological advancement. I read it twice and I still dont feel like its too much. gratz!

7thSense7thSenseabout 12 years ago
Wow

Very well written, love the theme to all the girls' names. I need some doses of this drug to use on some people

spankingfunforspankingfunforabout 12 years ago
Sapphire as the leader is humiliated but is still his slut slave!Making

Making all 5 super women his slut slaves while they still do their super hero stuff has to be one of my favorite fantasys!To have women ordinarily out of your league beg for your very touch,let alone your cock is awesome.My very favorite story!

vargas111vargas111about 13 years ago
One more thing

Get them all pregnant! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
final chapter

please with all the girls together, fucking together :)

LalocheziaLalocheziaover 14 years ago
Loved the series.

I loved the series. Very fun and very hot. Thank you!

vargas111vargas111about 16 years ago
Almost Perfect

Delicious thinking of five knocked up superheroines!

paparent28paparent28over 19 years ago
Very nice series

But what next, should the Pharmacist have the girls get other superheroines into the harem? I like that idea, or how about sexual rehabilitation by the pharmacist of female super-vilians. I like this line of story, but I want to see what happens after the full group is converted.

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Just a man indulging his desire to write erotic works. Haven't written in a long time, but am getting back to it now. I appreciate feedback, as long as it's respectful. If you don't like something, explain why. Don't just say "It sucks." It doesn't tell me what's wrong or...

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