All Comments on 'Fallen'

I was rather enamored by this story, to say the least. If only Sara and Ben could be together permanently. . . (sigh).

The story was well-written, with excellent character development and vividly descriptive erotic passages. Definitely five stars!

this is by far the best story yet im a new reader n i loved it fallen deffinately gets five stars

for you to have lost so many of the possibilities of your life by being raped and seduced by a man who has nothing but his own self-satisfaction as his goal. And that your religious background offered you no formof education to resist him when he came into your life.

You are definitely one of the most talented writers on Lit. I look forward to reading the rest of your stories.

Started my day off wonderfully!

Enjoyed it, yes, but would have enjoyed it more if the tense hadn't kept changing, even in mid sentence.

Very good story. I especially liked it because it was realistic and believable. Keep up the good work!