All Comments on 'Family Traditions Ch. 03'

Great continuation of this storyline.

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Suggestion 1: have the spankers slowly shave the vulvas of the spankees so that the latter can better show off their womanly charms. Suggestion 2: have the spankers slide the nozzles of squirt bottles into the rear passages of the spankees. The warmed lube will facilitate the insertion of dildoes on sticks or suction cups, which will hold the ladies in position for subsequent bun-warmings.

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Please make the episodes more vivid, appealing to all senses. Slow the pace. Describe rather than summarize.

It needs more. Her doing it to her husband. Why not finish this great story?

well written trilogy. author should continue the saga!

This was a hard chapter to finish reading. It either should have ended with the 2nd chapter or gone further with the last one. I understand not wanting to get bogged down with the sex but it is an iatrical part of the story. To gloss over it makes the story incomplete. You are wrighting erotic fiction. Not something that you need to edit the sex out if entirely. Overall the story was a good one but like a new lover, needs improvement to completely satisfy I. Look forward to your next work.

A follow up where Nikita punishes Eric, as he promised would be good. I hope it does not work out quite as he hoped.

Please continue the story. What happens when he is the sub

An interesting selection of mild humiliation and spanking stories in this series, some further proofreading would have been advisable as names have been swapped a few times