by Samuelx
You opened with the description of all three guys being bi, yet totally kept it out of the story. In my experience most women would want to see some guys sucking each other off.
There wasnt really any detail in this story and why do you keep using the term "like it was going out of style?" its extremely annoying, using it once is okay but good grief you used it like 6 times...start being more specific and descriptive, give the women some better descriptions besides big black woman COME ON! its like you didnt even try