All Comments on 'Fever Ch. 04'

by julybear7

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Avitreader80Avitreader80almost 13 years ago
Please don't stop!

I really like your Fever Series... I Hope you continue more often than not! Thanks!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 13 years ago
A good chapter

Interesting history and background of the clan. Erotic and sexual along with being a very good read.

Thanks for the chapter

rafman188rafman188almost 13 years ago
Change of perspective.

I've never been a Sci-fi/Fantasy fan - until now. I find the sci-fi element of this story every bit as fascinating and entertaining as the incest element. I should thank the author for broadening my mind, even this late in my lifetime (I'm 60 years old). Thank you Julybear7 and please keep this story going.

5/5

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
And It Was Going So Well

Until the "boss" was introduced and Rose had to have sex with him to prove what was going on. Blech!

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a5 months ago

Although ont really into science fiction, this chapter was exceedingly well done. I would enjoy a series solely about Lorenz. He appears to be a gentleman with powers which he uses appropriately.

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