All Comments on 'Fifty-Fifty'

what should be shared. Lack of communication, TK U MLJ LV NV

This was a real sexual adventure. Good blend of sex & humor.

The surprise at the end was great.

I hope this couple continues together.

Jeff

Sorry a bit weird, why no recognition? If it had been planned then I get it, but this was not planned. I don't care how apart this couple is and that they bored with each other, certain things would have been said or done, even in the afterglow. Reasonably well written up to that point so 3*